Short Films : My best Short Film thus far... Please rate/critique!

My best Short Film thus far... Please rate/critique!

Shot on a $50 budget.

First attempt at using dialog in my movies.

It's not perfect, but for being a short film, rate it on a scale from 1-10. (10 being highest)


Any advice/critique would be great!

POWERTOOLS FOR GIRLS - PART 1:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GYw7ZWH_KjM

POWERTOOLS FOR GIRLS - PART 2:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Zd7y9v7SvgE


Take a look at some of my other work as well, by clicking my picture to the right of the video.


THANK YOU VERY MUCH, HOPE YOU ALL ENJOY!


PS: I'm also open for work in any part of the U.S. Although I currently reside in San Francisco, CA.


POWERTOOLS FOR GIRLS:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GYw7ZWH_KjM
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