Short Films : Hi, Request Feedback on a Short Film that I made

Hi, Request Feedback on a Short Film that I made

Dear All,

I have done a short film and am looking for feedback on it. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RqNO8nZbrKE&feature=youtu.be

Pls keep in mind that this is the first attempt at a short film, or indeed any kind of a film. There is no denying that there is room for improvement, but I would still like feedback from you guys.

Also, sadly the few dialogues that are there are in Hindi (not english), and there will be a language brrier. However even so, I feel the viewer can get the gist of what the film is about, if they watch it. The dialogues are not that important.

Look forward to hearing from you.

Thx




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