Star Wars: The Force Awakens : OT - The Paradox War

OT - The Paradox War

Hi guys. I'm sorry I'm late with this Christmas present to you all, but hey, better late than never, right?

This story is a stand-alone(possibly, I may do a sequel if it's successfully recieved) story set in the timeline of The Force Awakens. It's about several members of that cast being transported to an alternate universe ruled over by a corrupted Rey. They also meet several other famous Star Wars characters, but I'll save those surprises for the story.

You can see it here:

I'd love to hear feedback.

"How come nobody's ever tried to be a superhero?" - Dave Lizewski, 2010.