Screenwriters : OK what do you really think?

OK what do you really think?

we're making a film and thought we would film the writing of it.
we ARE very serious about it but thought we'd have fun with the videos
but yeah can we have your opinions please
it WOULD REALLY HELP!

videos
http://uk.youtube.com/watch?v=oNlNuuQjyYs

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gPAztWeELKk



thank you!

and another (more random but hey!)
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HyuwSFwYm74

MOVIE:
http://uk.youtube.com/watch?v=oNlNuuQjyYs

Re: OK what do you really think?

I only watched a few minutes of your first video...but I thought it was fun. Very cute. But hey, that's just me. I find watching people going through the creative process quite interesting.

Could I watch more than five or ten minutes of your video? Maybe, maybe not. But again, I liked what I saw.

Something to keep in mind: it might be nice to occasionally SEE what it is you're writing. It'd break things up a bit, make it all more visual.

Keep it up and best of luck with your project!

Jim

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