Screenwriters : Your Opinions?

Your Opinions?

hello!
we have made a short film
about our time in the english countryside at a wonderful place called "Centre Parks"
so all non-english you can see how the english 'summer' if you like!
the footage is not very important as at the moment we're concentrating more on the film production and editing side of things
and we would very much like your opinions! so yes if you could help that would be great
enjoy (sorry we look so awful!)
http://uk.youtube.com/watch?v=APUDLMKeLCk



MOVIE:
http://uk.youtube.com/watch?v=oNlNuuQjyYs

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